Thursday, 19 July 2007

The Sweet Girl part 3 ( A horror story)

(Sorry for the Delay.... Enjoy :) )

Malsha Confined her self assuming that she had a nightmare, That she had fell asleep waiting for some one to come. But just to be sure, she headed over to the library to see if anyone had ever been murdered in this Agency. She was really shook up after that, but she hoped she was wrong, that it was a really bad nightmare.

After the kindly old librarian showed her where the newspaper relics were, she thanked her and started to work.

Malsha was just about to give up, when the article caught her eye:

"Unsolved murder still baffles FBI and faculty at Police"

"According to officials, a four-year-old Shania Mohamed was found dead in her mothers section, Who was a former Manager in IT section. Shania’s mother, Faxla left her daughter in the section and attended a meeting in the main hall. Where Shania was Alone Playing Computer Game.

Then there was a disturbance across Faxla’s Section which alerted officials. As the Agency was a big place no one reached the room, Until everything was over. Apparently, someone (whose name will not be mentioned in this article) was walking to her room, when the cries of a young girl were heard coming from Faxla’s room.

When school officials entered the room, they found Shania lying upon the floor, her throat slit opened. Strangely enough, no fingerprints, or any sample of DNA were found"

Malsha scrolled down, and saw a picture of a face so familiar, it sent chills down her spine. It was the little girl. There was that same look in her mysterious eyes, that look that made her seem so sad. "If only you would speak to me, and tell me who did this to you," she whispered under her breath, trying hard not to cry.

"Hey, Malsha!" someone said right behind her. She turned around and smiled. "Hey Maail, hows it going?"

"Fine," he said smoothly. "Watchya reading?" She rolled her eyes, the tears no longer there. "Nothing" she replied coolly. "I was getting ready to go and see whether you guys are here yet."

"Hey, how about I walk you to your section," he said mildly.

She agreed, so they started out.

As they entered to her Section, the little girl appeared out of nowhere. Malsha looked on in surprise as Maail looked down and sneered "Back from the afterlife, little girl?"

The little girl looked up with somewhat of a smile on her face.

"It's almost time," the little girl told Malsha in a small, girl-like voice.

Maail tried to lash out at the little girl, but he might as well of been hitting at the wind. His hand went through her like air.

She looked at Malsha again and smiled. "It’s almost time," she said again.

Maail looked at Malsha with a look of total hatred. With what seemed like a totally different person, he grabbed her by the wrist and started yanking her behind the building.

"Maail, what are you doing?!?!" she cried hysterically.

"What I've been planning on doing since I saw you the first time," he said calmly, too calmly.

With that in mind, he ripped at her clothes, took out his hunting knife, and slit her throat.

"New female Employee found dead behind History Section at Sate News Agency"

"Twenty-year-old Malsha Faaiz was found dead behind the History Section at 21:30 pm yesterday night. No fingerprints or any articles of DNA were found. She was clutching a hunting knife. Police speculate suicide."

The end

14 comments:

xLyCaNx said...

haadha haa vaa fake ending ekey...y kill her??? atleast let her solver da mystry and kill her :S

Anonymous said...

arrrk arrrk! dont 'the end ' it!! make maail pay!!

good story btw

Aisha said...

@ xLyCaNx. Ya she wanted to know who did it to the girl, well now she knows but the sad part is she can't tell anyone. well tat happens, there must be a next part to continue the story dho.like films hehehe


@ bulhaa. hehehe yeah Maail must be payed back for what he has done, but he wins again... hehehe

LIL GIRL said...

nice story.. gud tht she died. it luks more realistic.. btw.. how cum no dna? there shud b sumting eh? sum fabric o a hair.. sumting.. hehee..
nice story..=)

kaiza shozey said...

it felt like the story was rushed and forced to end, but nevertheless it had a good ending. the killer has to win sometimes too right?hehe.

Anonymous said...

Hey....:@ why let that maail thing survive??? Like Bulhaa said, make the guy pay in 'the little girl returns'or something... heheh ;)

But nice story ingey Aisha :) Only wish the ending was a lil different ..

iecco said...

haaadha avahah thi end kollleee :|

Forgiven said...

yeah... haadha avahakah thi nimaalee... ehaa salhikoh gengossa... well anyways.. nice story.. adhi continue kohlachey ingey.. hehe.. wanna c more of it... =P

[da one & only mt] said...

oola. the girl was bad too dho! that was unexpected. hehe. cool! :D but sad that it ended soo soon :(

Aisha said...

@ lil girl.ya sumtimes the story may end the way we don't want to dho. thanx for ur comment.

@ Kaiza shozey. It's a short story tat I wrote when I was in grade 12. Aslu short story ge limit a vure dhigu kanneyge. ehen veema ehaa avaha enimunee.

Aisha said...

@ pixsie, tats a great idea, im looking forward to write a new one. To be fair he should be payed back dho :)


@ Dark angel and forgiven.
As i told at kaiza shozey, its a short story i wrote when i was in 12. but im looking forward to continue it ingay :)

Aisha said...

@ MT. Actually the girl was killed by the same person. Maail is the person behind these killings. So this girl knew tat Malsha was next.

Anonymous said...

Why the hell am I the killer?!

Does Maail sound like a killer's name to you?!!?

And you wrote this when you were in grade 12?!

Why meee?!

Well atleast I got away.hehe

Nice story. Two thumbs up! ;D

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